Discussion Essay

Mutya Quratul Aini
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Advantages and Disadvantages Smoothing of Hair in the Female Life

Hair is a beautiful thing that on the head or which called with crown by female. By having a beautiful hair, every people do much kind of treatments to keep their hair, so that they will have and reach a great hair. Based on statistic from L’oreal professional to kompas female last time, it said that nine from ten female imagine want to have a beautiful hair with black straight hair. However, especially in Indonesia almost female typically have wave or curly hair. Therefore, to solve this problem, hair styles make a new treatment straightening hair who called with rebounding or smoothing. Almost people said that between smoothing and rebounding are the same meanings. However, they are different. Actually smoothing make hair more natural than rebounding. In addition, smoothing use less chemical action than rebounding about price is also different, rebounding cheaper than smoothing.  By getting the best it is genuine to waste much money. Therefore, smoothing present the riches people more than the poorest people.

Recently, smoothing is very popular in female life. Almost every female wants to try how does her hair looks like if she makes smoothing on her hair. Poorly, they never think before what is advantage and disadvantage that caused by smoothing. In addition, they also never try to find information or consult with doctor. Nowadays, we often find female smoothing her hair for many times. It happens because they want to have a great hair every time, and smoothing the hair to makes the hair great. Exactly, with smoothing for many times can damage female hair. Many problems about hair will present in their life. On the other hand, they cannot get the problem if they have knowledge how to keep the hair. Some treatments can be used to keep the hair. The other side, one of client Indri Afriani(25) says, “ The beginning my hair is  wave and slight. Every time, to get a straight hair, I should be rebound. Honestly, I should waste many times to prepare before do activity, but long time my hair being damage and dry. I hope, I have a new treatment to make hair more straight, looks like natural, not like rigid.”

To answer this problem, a public relation from Johny Andrean salon, Valerie said that smoothing will give a natural straight hair and effort to keep the natural texture of hair. Then, he also said that female do not worry and afraid with issue that straight hair process will make hair depraved. In my opinion smoothing has two sides which one be a positive thing while negative thing. By talking about positive side of smoothing, one of pulchritude master Theertha Sasidharan says,” Special quality of smoothing is it can minimize problem of hair and the most important help the female be able to have a beautiful hair because of smoothing and look likes more subdue.” 

According to Threertha Sasidharan said, we can get conclusion that smoothing is better one than rebounding. It will make hair more natural rather than rebounding.  In my opinion, smoothing makes female more confidence with their hair and also more styles. Then, tell about healthiness, it uses less chemical action on hair so that safety for head and also less fall of female hair. In addition, a client that explaining before says, “Smoothing is different with other straight treatment that I ever try. My hair be natural straight and I can make different style every time like make it wave or curly when I will go to party or formal event. I easier to keep my hair, and do not need to waste time and save my time,” It means smoothing also can safe female time and they can make many kind stylists on their hair for the short time.

 On the other hand, the negative side is also being a big discussion surrounding female. For example, smoothing is less work properly for who has curly hair except for a girl who has a wave hair. It means when female have a curly hair smoothing do not a good result for them. The other is to try about the cost. Smoothing is too expensive. If the people have a thin pocket or less money, may be it hard for them to do smoothing. They think that smoothing just waste their money for the unnecessary thing. However, by getting something that wonderful, I think is proper we should waste much money.

I have friend that have a straightening hair by smoothing. She said that when female getting straightening hair, they should be aware to keep their hair correctly. If they do not do like that, the effect is their hair will depraved. It also support by Arie Hidayat, a hair stylist from ‘Arie & Harry Salon. He says, “Although female air look like beautiful, they must do treatment correctly to keep their hair and also to get a maximum of result.” So, these are some tips to keep female straightening hair by smoothing. For example, female used conditioner and hair vitamin after they got shampoo. The other tips is they can use natural method such us use fruits, milk or curry. If the female try to keep their hair smoothing by using fruits, they can mix between banana and papaya. Then, it will be better if they use honey from bee being additional. Female use it along two-three hours and shampoo.  To get a justified result, female can use it two-three times every month. It is also the same procedure if they want to keep their hair by using milk or curry.

Thus, the treatment straightening hair with smoothing that surrounding in female life will make a good effect if they can keep their hair and get a maximum of result. They will have a beautiful hair if they use some tips to keep the hair while their hair will be more depraved if they never care with it. So, find many informative on or consult with hair stylish how to keep the hair. However, according to me, by having a natural hair would be better than make human hair with smoothing treatment. Actually, it just makes their hair deprave.