Discussion Essay

Mutya Quratul Aini
1300903
K.2

Advantages and Disadvantages Smoothing of Hair in the Female Life

Hair is a beautiful thing that on the head or which called with crown by female. By having a beautiful hair, every people do much kind of treatments to keep their hair, so that they will have and reach a great hair. Based on statistic from L’oreal professional to kompas female last time, it said that nine from ten female imagine want to have a beautiful hair with black straight hair. However, especially in Indonesia almost female typically have wave or curly hair. Therefore, to solve this problem, hair styles make a new treatment straightening hair who called with rebounding or smoothing. Almost people said that between smoothing and rebounding are the same meanings. However, they are different. Actually smoothing make hair more natural than rebounding. In addition, smoothing use less chemical action than rebounding about price is also different, rebounding cheaper than smoothing.  By getting the best it is genuine to waste much money. Therefore, smoothing present the riches people more than the poorest people.

Recently, smoothing is very popular in female life. Almost every female wants to try how does her hair looks like if she makes smoothing on her hair. Poorly, they never think before what is advantage and disadvantage that caused by smoothing. In addition, they also never try to find information or consult with doctor. Nowadays, we often find female smoothing her hair for many times. It happens because they want to have a great hair every time, and smoothing the hair to makes the hair great. Exactly, with smoothing for many times can damage female hair. Many problems about hair will present in their life. On the other hand, they cannot get the problem if they have knowledge how to keep the hair. Some treatments can be used to keep the hair. The other side, one of client Indri Afriani(25) says, “ The beginning my hair is  wave and slight. Every time, to get a straight hair, I should be rebound. Honestly, I should waste many times to prepare before do activity, but long time my hair being damage and dry. I hope, I have a new treatment to make hair more straight, looks like natural, not like rigid.”

To answer this problem, a public relation from Johny Andrean salon, Valerie said that smoothing will give a natural straight hair and effort to keep the natural texture of hair. Then, he also said that female do not worry and afraid with issue that straight hair process will make hair depraved. In my opinion smoothing has two sides which one be a positive thing while negative thing. By talking about positive side of smoothing, one of pulchritude master Theertha Sasidharan says,” Special quality of smoothing is it can minimize problem of hair and the most important help the female be able to have a beautiful hair because of smoothing and look likes more subdue.” 

According to Threertha Sasidharan said, we can get conclusion that smoothing is better one than rebounding. It will make hair more natural rather than rebounding.  In my opinion, smoothing makes female more confidence with their hair and also more styles. Then, tell about healthiness, it uses less chemical action on hair so that safety for head and also less fall of female hair. In addition, a client that explaining before says, “Smoothing is different with other straight treatment that I ever try. My hair be natural straight and I can make different style every time like make it wave or curly when I will go to party or formal event. I easier to keep my hair, and do not need to waste time and save my time,” It means smoothing also can safe female time and they can make many kind stylists on their hair for the short time.

 On the other hand, the negative side is also being a big discussion surrounding female. For example, smoothing is less work properly for who has curly hair except for a girl who has a wave hair. It means when female have a curly hair smoothing do not a good result for them. The other is to try about the cost. Smoothing is too expensive. If the people have a thin pocket or less money, may be it hard for them to do smoothing. They think that smoothing just waste their money for the unnecessary thing. However, by getting something that wonderful, I think is proper we should waste much money.

I have friend that have a straightening hair by smoothing. She said that when female getting straightening hair, they should be aware to keep their hair correctly. If they do not do like that, the effect is their hair will depraved. It also support by Arie Hidayat, a hair stylist from ‘Arie & Harry Salon. He says, “Although female air look like beautiful, they must do treatment correctly to keep their hair and also to get a maximum of result.” So, these are some tips to keep female straightening hair by smoothing. For example, female used conditioner and hair vitamin after they got shampoo. The other tips is they can use natural method such us use fruits, milk or curry. If the female try to keep their hair smoothing by using fruits, they can mix between banana and papaya. Then, it will be better if they use honey from bee being additional. Female use it along two-three hours and shampoo.  To get a justified result, female can use it two-three times every month. It is also the same procedure if they want to keep their hair by using milk or curry.

Thus, the treatment straightening hair with smoothing that surrounding in female life will make a good effect if they can keep their hair and get a maximum of result. They will have a beautiful hair if they use some tips to keep the hair while their hair will be more depraved if they never care with it. So, find many informative on or consult with hair stylish how to keep the hair. However, according to me, by having a natural hair would be better than make human hair with smoothing treatment. Actually, it just makes their hair deprave.

Quiz 1

Mutya Quratul Aini
1300903
Sunday, 28^th 2014

My Experience in Writing

Six months ago, I learned about paragraph writing, but this semester I am learning about essay writing. As we know, it is also different between them because essay is longer than paragraph. In addition, I must add many ideas to support the topic. Moreover, I continue my study in writing as a writing 2. My lecturers are Prof. Anshar and Mrs. Lina. Both of Prof. Anshar and Mrs. Lina are different. However, for this time I am going to tell you about Mrs. Lina.

Actually, many students know her as a perfectionist lecturer. It is possible, because I have heard that she was a good student college in Indonesia. She is also manages everything surely. So, I think that she want to apply what did she do the last moment to her student in college. As a   result, she is very discipline and never bored to give us many assignments. Actually, she just wants her student to be a good person, but it does not the same assumption for her student. They think that every kind of tasks that Mrs. Lina asks to do is very heavy for them. Poorly!

Based on my statement before that she is a very discipline person so that she has the rules in teaching. For example, every student should make every kind of her assignments. Exactly, she never heard or accept when her student do not make the task although with many reasons. Therefore, all of students are afraid if they forget to make it. Writing essay is one of her task, but she also asks us to find a peer reader to correct our essay. Perhaps, we make at least six times essay because of correction from peer. It is a good step, but we are not usual with it.

Especially for me, I also study hard to make a good essay like Mrs. Lina wants. However, I got problems while I was writing such as grammatical, punctuation, tenses, and etc. Then, I also hard to combine the ideas and make each of sentences must be coherence. To combine ideas, I ought to read more information. Not only read but also understand what our reading is. Honestly, reading is not usual yet for me. I am feeling sleepy if I already read on an hour. Although I will try to read every time until I can read regularly and also be my hobby.

Lucky me has a peer reader, because when I have mistakes, they will correct it. In conclusion, I am sure that what Mrs. Lina ask for me to do only to give the best. She forced me to study hard only change me to be a good person. I believe that impossible if somebody give instruction/something without think what the result is.

My experience

My Experience During Learn Writing

Last semester, I studied writing 1 for six months. Actually, it was my first time learned writing focus. Before, I knew a little, but during six months ago I learned a lot. On the other hand, it was also increase my knowledge and new experience for me. Although, it was not usual to me.

I studied with two lecturers in writing course, Mr. Saunir and Mrs. Fitra. Both of them were my new lecturers because I never studied with them before. As a result, I should know their personality between them like their rules in class, attendance and the way in lecturer. It also has differences between them.

First, I told about Mr. Saunir. He was very discipline and had the rules when he was explaining. He asked us to present our paragraph in front of class. For instance, he asked each of us to and showed it by in focus. In addition, he used discussing methods in the class. Meanwhile, he was different from Mrs. Fitra because she used speech methods in the class and made piece of paper one by one every meeting. Although, she seldom came in the class, perhaps she had another business.  Thus, both of them were very kind and also made me understand how to make a good paragraph, and got a new science in writing.

This is First Time